2013年1月31日星期四

Difference of human before prehistory and human in the agricultural revolutions


Difference of human before prehistory and human in the agricultural revolutions

As you know, most of the human’s lives are suitable nowadays. However do you know that human’s life in the prehistory and in the agricultural revolutions. There are a lot of differences.

From my point of view, the difference is that in the prehistory, earliest prehistoric age is the Paleolithic age (Old Stone Age).  Human gather together to become a part of groups which hunted, fished and gathered plants food. It is not living. It just likes surviving. They do not know how to feed the animal. And it is difficult for them to breed the baby. Or they do not know that they have too store the food or vegetables in the house. It causes them have got food to eat in the Winter. Therefore, at that time, Human’s population is too low. And continue to decrease. But, in the agricultural revolutions—— the Neolithic Revolutions (New Stone Age), this is a shift from itinerant hunting or gathering to more permanent settlements centered on agriculture. Population rise due to increased ability to take care of the young children. I think human’s education first emerges or embodies at that time. Hierarchies appears in village life, the status of women is lowered as women are confined more to domestic duties. Invention of wheel and plow make it possible to produce enough food for storage. Villagers were polytheists, worshipped multiple nature, human and animal gods.  

In conclusion, compare with these two different ages. We know that a lot human gather to be a part of group or living in the village is the most outstanding difference. We trust that human’s life can be developed good or rapid via success.

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  1. This is a very good essay, Robert. You make some good points - I really like the part when you say humans were not living, just surviving. It is also an excellent point to say that human education really began in the Neolithic Age.

    I do not take off too many points for grammar and other errors, since I know it is difficult for you to express yourself in English. I am most interested to see if you understand the concepts we cover in class. But I am curious to know who your English teacher is. Is that teacher helping you become better at writing English? We all want to help you, Robert.

    Your grade for this essay is 46/50 - an A. Very good effort.

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    1. Well, Mrs Zurkowski is my English 1's teacher.
      Mrs Seiler is my EIS teacher

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